Will you point out where this makes no sense?

From start to finish, it comes over as an exercise in random rhyme. Subconsciously constructed so that only the middle to end are seeking reason and message, whereas the beginning is totally at the mercy of a moment's passing thought. These kind of pieces are often the seeds of more involved latter works, when we see fit to revisit and purloin the best that chance gave us. My favourite, is "to catacomb" with its nice staccato and percussive effect, but I would look for an alternative to "view".